Issues With The Second Draft

After completing our second draft, we asked our teachers to give us some feedback on minor improvements we could make. One adjustment we were given was to make areas of the voice over louder in order to make them easier to hear. For example at 3.40 the narrator says 'go on road trips'. This is lost behind the music and is therefore hard for the audience to hear. We will therefore be going back onto iMovie and adjusting the sound of each segment of the voice over in order to make it easier to hear.